finally i near
the finishing line
but..
it moves
further and further
i keep following
till i reach
a familiar point
…the beginning

poetry and some more
Poems, Poetry Plus Passion
poetry and some more
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Dear Sonya,
Thank you for sharing with us this poem which re-frames life and achievement and everything. It makes us think of how we may know the cost of everything, but the value of nothing.
All good wishes,
robert
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That is so true Robert. It is good to keep in mind that we shall return to where we came from.
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It’s interesting about the line moving further and further.
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Sometimes it does feel that way to me. My goal keeps shifting away.
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