falling…
falling…
into a bottomless pit
but wait!
a bottomless pit
is the best type of pit to fall into
falling…
falling…
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poetry and some more
poetry and some more
falling…
falling…
into a bottomless pit
but wait!
a bottomless pit
is the best type of pit to fall into
falling…
falling…
***
poetry and some more
....are determined by mind
write, right?
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SONYA KASSAM 
Want to share my experience at Sadhguru’s Isha Yoga Centre ,Coimbatore ,Tamil Nadu, India :
https://the-passport-souls.travel.blog/2017/03/28/my-first-spiritual-travel-sadhgurus-isha-yoga-centre-coimbatoreindia/
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Hello Rahul and thank you so much for sharing your experience at the Isha Yoga Centre. Your comment was lying in Spam so I only just got to it. I really enjoyed reading your post and was happy to receive an unbiased opinion. Thanks!
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Glad that you find the write worth a read..My only purpose was to clear doubts that I was having before I went there ,with utmost honesty so that many like myself can decide their individual leap of faith..
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Amazing:)))
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The inspiration was amazing :)
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Falling seems accidental, what if you chose to descend into it? And the bottomless bottom of the pit was the depths of your soul?
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Hmmm…I wanted to make it seem accidental
And then the realization :)
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LOL Point well taken
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;) Great to hear from you Bob
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Dear Sonya,
Thank you for sharing this poem.
The constricted self can get so tight, so choking, that the pit (seemingly) disappears. But it’s there. Thank goodness.
All good wishes,
robert
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And the hurt lies in landing not in falling, doesn’t it?
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Dear Sonya,
Yes
All good wishes,
robert
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Nice music. :)
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‘Bottomless pit’, quite interesting.
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Thank you for reading.
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A nice twist :)
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Yes when I heard it, I was totally inspired to share as a poem. Thanks for your visit :)
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