enter heaven, if you must
but forsake even a trace of humanity
no place for the ego
lose your self, then
enter heaven…
if you must

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Yet the ego prevents one from being truly human.
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Very true.
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Dear Sonya,
Thank you for sharing this poem.
This poem, in an intriguing manner, brings to mind some of what Hazrat Rabia of Basra has shared about wishing not for the fruits of heaven nor being fearful of the fires of hell.
All good wishes,
robert
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Thanks for that beautiful reminder Robert.
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Interesting poem I think.
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Thanks for your comment Ranu.
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