as the pulse is embedded in heartbeats
so the soul lies within drumbeats
in the beginning was rhythm
at the end…an unheard sound

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Another gem that makes me pause and ponder and re-read.
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Thanks Kunal.
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Dear Sonya,
Thank you for this poem. There is indeed something powerfully deep in the heartbeat, the drumbeat, and the mysterious beat of the universe. No wonder percussive sound is found cross culturally as a vehicle to help us approach the divine.
All good wishes,
robert
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That is a great observation Robert.
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I will pay you my highest compliment. I wish I had written it.
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Wow thank you Bob, you surely know how much that means to me.
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I never thought of pulse and soul this way. It’s a very clever way of showing the distinction, Sonya. :)
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Thanks Ranu :)
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Lovely!
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So glad to hear you think so, Wendell :)
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