i did search for reality
but lost sight of my dreams
where dust mingles with ash
unspoken words shall be heard
the dreamer lives on

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Poems, Poetry Plus Passion
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Dear Sonya,
What a fine poem this is! It brings to mind how all life seems to be an urgent manifested reaching…toward something.
All good wishes,
robert
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an infinite longing, isn’t it so?
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Loved this piece
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thank you so much Yagneshji
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Good thoughts, Sonya. :)
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thank you Ranu :)
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“…where dust mingles with ash” = brilliant!
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thank you
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I did find this a bit confusing. May be perhaps I don’t understand poetry, the essence.
In my opinion, ‘lost sight of dreams’ and ‘the dreamer lives on’ are quite contradictory, don’t you think?
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I am glad that the contradiction prompted you to ask me more :)
I was expressing hope that dreams never really die even if they are kept aside. And that the dreamer shall live through them…forever.
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That’s a good explanation. ‘Twas nice.
Well written, btw. 🙂
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Thank you
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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