Stranded!
Beyond the sand dune
I noticed him
Grateful to find a saviour
How was I to know
He was thinking the same of me…
poetry and some more
poetry and some more
Stranded!
Beyond the sand dune
I noticed him
Grateful to find a saviour
How was I to know
He was thinking the same of me…
Poems, Poetry Plus Passion
poetry and some more
write, right?
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SONYA KASSAM 
Attraction; it can be a beautiful outcome. :)
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Absolutely!
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Wonderful!!
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Thank you so much!
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You’re Welcome
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Dear Sonya,
Thank you for this lovely poem which, for me, a message highly nuanced.
What if we all (all people, everywhere) brought to each other a co-savioring energy, you for me, me for you, everyone for me, me for everyone? There would be no savior, but there would be savioring..
As the Three Musketeers would proclaim: “One for all, and all for one!”
All good wishes,
robert
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Wise words, Robert. I was looking forward to seeing what you would decipher from this poem. As you said it is a nuanced message :)
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Nice place to be stranded, it seems great minds think alike. Great poem, Sonya! :)
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If you have a great companion, any place would be a nice place to be stranded :) Thanks Ranu.
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Hahaha, good one. But, also philosophically right on.
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Hey Sreejit, so pleased you appreciated the humour as well as the subtle idea behind it.
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