Such a beautiful breeze
in the deep darkness
in the dead of night
God’s sweet breath
Soft exhalations as
He sleeps satisfied
in knowing that
I have the ability to
take care of myself
poetry and some more
poetry and some more
Such a beautiful breeze
in the deep darkness
in the dead of night
God’s sweet breath
Soft exhalations as
He sleeps satisfied
in knowing that
I have the ability to
take care of myself
Poems, Poetry Plus Passion
poetry and some more
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SONYA KASSAM 
What profound and unconventional thoughts Sonya! Beautiful indeed.
Thank you🙏🏻
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When God believes in you what do you fear? Lots of love…..
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Dear Sonya,
I agree with Ranu. This is a lovely poem. I especially like the first section, connoting God’s presence in the deep darkness.
All good wishes,
robert
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Which just shows that God isn’t always “light” isn’t it?
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Now you’ve opened a new way of thinking altogether! What a thought, going against the grain but worth contemplating over…You’re going to keep us awake, Sonya
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Hi Kunal,
Totally not my intention that you should lose sleep, but yes being aware is definitely a good thing :)
I wrote more about darkness in my post Enlightenment here
https://followyourshadow.wordpress.com/2015/05/29/enlightenment/
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I meant losing sleep in a good way – searching for the elusive, so no worries, I’m all for it. And will check out your other link… take care, thanks!
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Lovely poem. :)
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Great that you liked it, Ranu
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Fabulous!
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Thank you Kunal
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