some are broken memories
other memories break us
some promises are broken
other promises break us
some relationships are broken
other relationships break us
what is broken may never be fixed
but if we allow it, what can break us
will eventually make us
Especially if we are broken into nothingness… right?
absolutely true! I have a poem coming up about that.
Can’t wait to experience that!
Dear Sonya,
Thank you for creating and sharing this poem.
This poem reflects what some say that brokenness can break down walls which keep out what we actually seek.
All good wishes,
robert
“brokenness can break down walls which keep out what we actually seek.” That is a beautiful phrase, thanks Robert.
Powerfully emotional piece, Sonya! The sheer consistency of quality of your work is really impressive!
Oh thank you Kunal, that is a great encouragement indeed.
I’m simply being honest! God bless!
Good poem. :)
Thanks so much Ranu :)
some are broken memories
other memories break us… just wowwww
Thanks Mohit :)
Though simple, this is deep.
Hi Shreya. I am glad to hear you appreciated this poem. You have described exactly what I try to send a message across as…simple but I hope to make someone think.
Yes.