goodbye after goodbye
worlds drifted apart
brick by brick
barriers were raised
moments within moments
they became just memories
prayers, more prayers
but no one listened
took nothing away from nothing
and only nothing remained
…
we could have had it all

Your poems always leave me in a thoughtful mood, but this is on another level.
“took nothing away from nothing
and only nothing remained”
Wow!
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Thanks for that wonderful comment. It was a phrase inspired from an article I read about the zero.
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It’s when nothing remains that you find everything….. Take care & blessings!
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Indeed so Kunal, thanks for the blessings :)
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We never realize until we lose it, that there is such a thing as Patience, which heals all wounds. :)
Your poem is very thoughtful. :)
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Well said Ranu, thank you :)
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Dear Sonya,
Thank you for this poem.
As always, your poems are contemplation-generators :).
We will have it all.
All good wishes,
robert
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The above comments including yours indicate that this poem (and others) make you contemplate. It is what I always hope for when I write, and I am so happy to hear this.
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