my words leave their fingerprints
indelible and uniquely mine
if you tried you would recognise me
only i write that way
i sing as i alliterate
pausing for the music, i question
what appears mundane
with precise, frugal phrases
you, well…
… get the point
my meek remarks
hide a rage suppressed
follow the pattern
the rhetoric hides irony
a subtle ending
I vouch for your unique fingerprint… I have yet to read anyone that can make every word and nuance be in exactly the right place! Simple, yet powerful, fiery and romantic at the same time, soft and delicate yet thought provoking and direct… Keep up the journey, Sonya!
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My response would do little justice to the magnitude of your comment. All I can say is thank you for your consistent encouragement. The journey is easier with friends :)
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Love it. This one I am going to steal. ;)
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Haha Sean, I give you permission to steal
But then don’t forget … the fingerprints can never be erased
;)
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Your poem is beautiful, yes I can see you did make your point.
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Thank you for appreciating this poem :)
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