nothing in this world
is ever completely yours
detach from your deeds
for they will either
slur your soul
or
exhilarate your ego

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Poems, Poetry Plus Passion
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I was beginning to miss your poetry even though your other posts have been great too… What a beautiful comeback! Now you have got me asking why it is that I always want to possess something and who is this within me that is so possessive!
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Thank you so much for appreciating this poem.
Might be difficult to figure out who and why, just accept with awareness. Awareness is probably the first step to disconnection.
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Beautiful. I will add this one to my quotes. Thank you.
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Thank you Gloria.
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Truth beautifully expressed!
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I do appreciate your feedback Rekha.
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Great words, Sonya slur your soul or exhilarate your ego.
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I loved those phrases too! Thanks Ranu.
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Ahh-mazing!
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Thh-ank you Sean!
:)
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Dear Sonya,
What a very great poem, speaking such truth. I like the way you put this…soul slurring and ego exhilaration.
All good wishes ,
robert
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Thanks for your encouraging and wonderful comments Robert.
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