forbidding thoughts that are new
harvests of regurgitated concepts
progressing on a treadmill
ultimate destination…
…nowhere
old stars burn out
slowly sacrificing their cores
so that new stars are born
giving you a chance
to alter your destiny
new promises to break
new dreams to shatter
new smiles to fake
new lies to mutter
old values at stake
dignity no longer matters
over time
new meanings
between layers
of ancient verses
in substantial scriptures
…. god must be a poet
this “poem” is actually made up of 4 separate and unrelated micropoems. Created from prompts using phrases containing the word “new” over 4 consecutive days. I usually stay away from similar prompts too close to each other, because I am afraid that I will end up only re-wording the same theme and see the limitations of my creativity. I am happy that I pushed myself to try out these prompts and proud of an invisible, though unintended, flow through them. Incidentally, the 4 prompts by #orjay were…
~ new harvests
~ new stars
~ new promises
~ new meanings
co-incidence? or conspiracy
After appreciating four nuances of the concept of newness, I don’t believe in limitations to your creativity. And, the beautiful common thread even though unintended… Bravo! Just beautiful….
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Thank you so much. I am glad I picked up on that sliver of a connection. A unique way to create.
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Dear Sonya,
How wonderful is this poem of 4 micro-poems! Thank you so much for creating and sharing it here.
I’m left with reflections about the depth and power of sincerity and authenticity.
All good wishes,
robert
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Happy to hear you enjoyed it, Robert. It certainly was a different way for me to write a post.
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I say conspiracy. ;)
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haha and you wouldn’t be the first to say it :-)
thanks Sean.
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Amazing.
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It’s wonderful, how you can join four prompts in one poem. I love your poem it’s amazing.
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I was very surprised to see how they all came together…thanks Ranu
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