when the mischievous moon
taunted from the shadow’s edge
the sun was reminded
that it was merely another star

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I vouch for you… I have seen the mischievous moon make the sun ponder his humble nature… Lovely poetry… exquisite thoughts… let no closed minds deter the Truth from flowing through you :-)
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Your encouragement means more than my words can ever convey. Thank you.
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What if is he was calling?
and in your distorted perceptions
and fixed opinions
that you have taken
frozen
as Reality
are false?
And you were wrong?
Would that be too much to digest?
But lets not go there shall we
“Who needs God when we’ve got your opinions”
Look where we started
a completely bowed heart,
Surrendered in love
a smile
what has become of it?
you know, even the treatise of hudaybiya
they kept the kaba intact
refused his name (pbuh) and sent them on their way
the humiliation was enough!
But you, dear one,
Have completely demolished this space
and set it ablaze
You said peace
I opened to you my heart
What did I know,
Like a Hind, you would rip it right apart
for what?
Two drops of blood;
more ink for some poems?
In true jahili tribe style
While you spend the night
in your platonic caves
feeding your shadows
Under moonlit poetic raves
As dawn approached
And the Divine descended
Seeking a heart beat,
Upon which the rhythm of the stars
blended;
I heard
Ever so faintly,
The angels
Cry.
Wish you all the best
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I had no intention of causing any bad feelings with my poetry.
However, you used the term “Hind” in a derogatory fashion, may I ask is it I who has a fixed opinion? Am I the one behaving in true jahili tribal style? If my image disturbs you, perhaps you need to look within yourself. In case you are interested this phrase is from my poem Stained Reflections.
If I welcomed you to my blog with Peace, then should you choose to leave, I also bid you farewell in Peace.
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Now this one shows your sense of humor.
Ranu
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Thank you Ranu, I wanted to show that the mighty can be put in their place by the insignificant.
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Greetings,
This is really nice. Thank you for it.
May we not flee from our selves, and thus lose sight of the moon.
All good wishes,
robert
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Thank Robert. We can run, but we can never hide.
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Very well said we can run, but we can never hide, and even when we run we can not run from truth and ourselves.
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Thank you Akhtar Sahib
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