When wishes collide

when wishes collide
it is i who shall abide
i care less for pride
more that i am your bride
… that is
till i discover your weak side

7 thoughts on “When wishes collide”

Anon says:

October 30, 2013 at 11:47 pm

Well, whoever you are- im sure youll know if there is love, then you are not just his weakness but also his stregnth.

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Anon says:

October 30, 2013 at 11:57 am

… And what if you were his weak side? Would you discover yourself?

I thought you were sonebody else all along. Appologies.

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1. followyourshadow says:
  
  October 30, 2013 at 1:13 pm
  
  But I am somebody else.
  
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Robert says:

October 27, 2013 at 4:54 am

Greetings,

Thank for this poem which implies a story beneath it.

All good wishes,

robert

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1. followyourshadow says:
  
  October 30, 2013 at 1:12 pm
  
  Thanks Robert. I like to imply :-)
  
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ranu802 says:

October 26, 2013 at 10:16 pm

Very interesting poem,I love the line,’that is ’till I discover your weak side’.
Ranu

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1. followyourshadow says:
  
  October 30, 2013 at 1:08 pm
  
  ;-) Thanks Ranu
  
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