if i submit
what can you do?
if you stop me
i will only submit
if i am needed
i will submit
when you tire of me
i shall also submit to that
the shadow hunter returns home empty handed ~
what could he hope to catch ~
when the shadows hid deep in his heart
Amazement is♦Born in death of apathy♦Wonder in all you see♦Enthusiasm in all you do
they made a pact to die
for love would resurrect them
from the depths of the soil
…
or so they believed
All your life wasted under a delusion
In death reality hit hard
Rebirth erases only memory
Your deeds remain imprinted
children of the sun~
fragments of stars on earth~
destined for greatness~
blessed but betrayed~
out-shined by their own shadows
Greetings,
I very much like this.
Your words convey so much, so many layers. They bring to life what hits hard.
All good wishes,
robert
Thank Robert. They may be hard facts but I hope I portrayed them gently :-)
Loved reading these. The shadow hunter is especially hauting, REALLY like it. Keep ’em coming!! :)
Thank you Cristina and welcome to my blog :-) There are more of my Micropoetry posts under the category Quotes and VerseLite